I have no idea what's in here. I was young and dumb and probably problematic.
Absolutely breathtaking. You just might be the best author I've ever had the pleasure to read.
Pretty good! It brought something about the " first kiss feeling " to my mind. If you keep getting better like this, you'll get some attention from the publishers very soon. Keep it up!
Good job, Isaac. This is the best short of yours to date.
This reminds me of your story, "free falling," which was one of my favorites! This one is right up there with it. You think of the strangest things and I love it!
I hope it gets here in time for V-Day. Oh ho ho. Hee. I wish I was a zombie filled with love.
It reminds me of Free Fall too, and that short story about the alternate bathroom dimension. It is a pretty unique style of slowly moving from reality to imaginary.
Wow. I loved it. You're ridiculously talented. I live in Ballard, maybe I'll run into you one day.